SCBWI Success Story: A Picture Book Collaboration

by Deborah Abela and Marjorie Crosby-Fairall

WHERE IT ALL BEGAN: A bear and a boy

THE BEAR

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In 2015, a group of authors and illustrators went to Taronga Park Zoo, Sydney, for a day of drawing and writing. We chose five locations and it was Deb’s job to give creative prompts at each. One of the destinations was the bear sanctuary.

The creative prompts were:

Bear Declared Hero

Hunt for Missing Bear

First Bear in Space.

It was here we saw Mr Hobbs, a sun bear who’d been rescued from a cage in Cambodia after his mother had been killed by poachers. He’d been deeply affected by the separation and found it hard to relate to the other bears.

Original Sketch and Scribble illustration by Marjorie

Original Sketch and Scribble illustration by Marjorie

As we wrote and drew, I snuck a look at illustrator Marjorie Crosby-Fairall’s sketchbook and saw her picture of a bear floating in space. My writer’s brain immediately began asking:

Why is he there?

What’s he thinking?

Why does he look so happy?

I asked Marjorie if I could write Bear’s story and she agreed. I went away and, being the painfully slow writer that I am, I took a few weeks to get Bear ready. Ten minutes after I sent Marjorie the story, she wrote back saying it gave her chills. Turns out, I’d written about her son.

THE BOY

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When Marjorie’s son Cavan was young, he was quirky and analytical and he was obsessed with space. So much so, that when he was due to start preschool, Marjorie and her husband worried he wouldn’t find any friends, but luckily he met another boy who also loved space and they became best buddies.

As a kids’ author and teacher, I’ve always been intrigued by the kids who are different. The ones who don’t quite fit in. I wanted to write a story where difference is celebrated and let kids know that what makes them different is also what makes them unique!

So what’s the story of Bear in Space?

Bear doesn’t always feel at home on earth. He doesn’t quite get the other bears and they often don’t understand him. So he disappears into books, especially about space. When he builds a rocket, and flies into space, no one laughs at him or calls him names, but soon he’s lonely, until something extraordinary happens.

THE PITCH

I pitched the story to Walker Books Publisher, Linsay Knight, who published my first novel, Max Remy Superspy in 2002. She loved the story but asked, ‘Where’s the third act?’

She was right! It ended but there was no ending.

Big difference!

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So Marjorie and I created thumbnails to work out the rest of the story. These were crucial in developing not only the artwork but the story. Poring over them, we made sure the story flowed and had a strong structure…including that ending. We spoke about pacing and page turns, character and emotional beats, colour palettes and white space. Where the story needed to be bright and full, and where it needed to breathe.

As many of you know, it’s an unspoken rule that publishers DO NOT like authors and illustrators to work or pitch together, but the story so intrinsically belonged to both of us, we couldn’t imagine not working on it as a team.  

So we ignored the rule.

CHARACTER ILLUSTRATIONS

Linsay and art director, Sarah Davis, wanted Marjorie to draw the main character in various poses, to see how he’d look but also gain a sense of his personality. The original Bear sketch from the zoo wasn’t intended for a picture book, so Marjorie needed to rework the character so he was more childlike. These images show the development from the initial sketch to colour studies.

 THE BOOK IS CONTRACTED!

Linsay and Sarah loved Marjorie’s drawings and we signed the contract. Phew!

FROM ROUGHS TO FINAL ART

Marjorie took her thumbnails to roughs and when they were approved, to final colour art.

 FINALLY

The whole process was collaborative and at each stage, we hashed out ideas, we challenged each other’s decisions and we all fell in love with Bear.

Sometimes it’s good to break the rules, and back yourself. But also, put in the hard work.

For Bear, sometimes it only takes one person to make us feel not so alone. One person who understands us. Bear in Space is about being different and having friends who love us just the way we are.

Watch the trailer for Bear

Teacher notes

Build Your Own Rocket

 

BIOS

Deborah Abela www.deborahabela.com

Deborah trained as a teacher and was the writer/producer of a national children’s TV show before writing twenty-seven internationally published and awarded kids’ books. There’s her cranky climate change trilogy, Grimsdon, New City and Final Storm, and The Stupendously Spectacular Spelling bee and The Most Marvellous Spelling Bee Mystery.

 

Marjorie Crosby-Fairall www.crosby-fairall.com

Marjorie has illustrated over twenty children’s books and has been published internationally. Her awards include the CBCA Eve Pownall Award. Her books include The Boy in the Big Blue Glasses with Susanne Gervay, One Christmas Eve with Corinne Fenton, Say Cheese with Frances Watts and Dinosaur Dads with Lesley Gibbes. Bear in Space is Deb and Marjorie’s first collaboration. 

 

SCBWI ACT Kicks off 2020 with Aleesah Darlison, talking Series Matters

SCBWI ACT kicked off the year in style on Thursday 27 February as they heard from the phenomenal Aleesah Darlison about Series Matters, and her awesome new series League of Llamas.

We started with 20 second speed introductions from the new ACT committee members Shelly Unwin (Coordinator), Krys Saclier, Mitch Frost, Sarah Wallace and Catherine Meatheringham. 

Aleesah Darlison shared her journey to publishing 52 children’s books in 10 years (yes, you did read that right – 52 books in 10 years!) Some of the advice Aleesah offered is to treat writing as a business, actively seek and create opportunities, and promote and market your work.

Aleesah has published several series (with a few more in the pipeline) including The Unicorn Riders Series, The Little Witch Series and her new League of Lamas Series. Series are great to write as kids love series, they fall in love with characters and become fiercely loyal.

Tips on writing a successful series is to Plan Plan and Plan! Plan the entire series out including all of the characters, setting, themes and branding before you start to write.. Then write the first book in the series (to absolute perfection) and pitch that book, along with the plan for the series, to publishers. 

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We also heard amazing speed pitches for the recently released: Leaping Lola (CBCA Notable!!) by Tracey Hawkins, Jelly-Boy by Nicole Godwin, A Lighthouse in Time by Sandra Bennett, Our Bush Capital by Samantha Tidy and Emergency Rescue Angel by Cate Whittle  Stand out performances by All, and such a tremendous collection of books from our SCWBI chapter!!

In their absence we also had the opportunity to peruse and purchase the awesome new books from our local powerhouse authors Tania McCartney: Fauna, Evie and Pog Puppy Playtime, Evie and Pog Take Off, I 🤍 The World and Ivy Bird, and Stephanie Owen Reeder: Will The Wonder Kid, Trouble In the Surf, and a reprint of Lenny the Legend adorned with shiny stickers! Busy busy ladies!!! We missed you!

We ended with a Q&A session with Aleesah. She answered questions on chapter length – plan the length before you write and make it roughly even. And questions on whether marketing and promotion are important – yes it’s an absolute must! Thank you Aleesah for coming along to our first event for 2020 and sharing your journey and advice on how to write a successful series.

We’re now busy planning the SCBWI ACT Development Day on 21 June. Save the date as we have exciting speakers including Alex Adsett and Dee White already lined up, and more to come!

The Inspiration of Finn's Feather with keynote speakers Rachel Noble and Essie White

A touching observation from Roving Reporter, Shaye Wardrop during the SCBWI 2019 Conference Dinner Dance on the special relationship with US agent Essie White and Australian author Rachel Noble.

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Rachel Noble

Never ignore the stories that come from your heart,’ says author Rachel Noble as she tells us the story behind the publication of her debut picture book Finn’s Feather.

I don’t think there’s a dry eye in the room as Rachel talks about the heartbreak of losing her darling boy, Hamish, and her passion and determination to honour him through her words.

After exploring different genres and using writing as therapy, the idea for Finn’s Feather came in a perfect moment. After rushing home to write it down, Rachel tells us she found a feather waiting for her on the front step and she knew she had found the story she was searching for.

My throat is full of rocks and tears well in my eyes as I listen to Rachel speak. She is passionate and strong and brave and amazing, and Finn’s Feather is a powerful and special picture book that helps kids understand death and loss in the most gentle and heart-warming way.

STORIES HELP KIDS NAVIGATE EMOTIONS - AN AUTHENTIC STORY WILL HELP YOU HEAL

It is a book for every home, every school, every library, and I urge you to find a copy and experience the powerful and magical story for yourself.

Rachel introduces the crowd to her literary agent, Essie White, of Storm Literary Agency, and Essie tells us how she met Rachel and her work.

Essie says, ‘stories can heal’ and ‘the importance of good literature cannot be understated’, and the crowd nods in understanding, knowing exactly what she means.

Essie tells us she ‘believes so much in the transformative power of literature’, that ‘an authentic story will help you heal’, that ‘stories help kids navigate emotions’.

She is so right, and we all sit quietly and ponder on these insightful words as she talks about her experience and extensive involvement in children’s literature over her career, about her love of books and her belief in the power of books to teach and guide children through their lives.

Essie leaves us with one more thought — one more piece of advice I will never forget.

Essie says,

this isn’t a profession; it’s a vocation. Do your best work because the best people in the world are waiting.’

Thank you Rachel for sharing your journey with us all, and thank you Essie for your amazing insights and powerful advice.

Shaye Wardrop

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